Open Poetry #34 |
Tresses |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
I see kittens in your hair. To them you are the God they choose. Because your eyes make them unafraid. Because your joy,... amid such innocence, fills their lives with wonder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful, reminds me so much of my grand daughter |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How lovely this is! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Because your eyes make them unafraid." Absolutely right - the eyes say it all. A tender write! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very interesting. Kittens in your hair. Soft… JL |
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