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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-02 06:48 AM



Significance


They say "silence is golden"
as this heart journeys through another day
and time shadows the cold
blocking the stillness that surrounds
to mock the awakening of
those nightmorning feelings.

Eyes can gesture only so much,
expression filled to the overflowing
and come tomorrow
another lesson will have been learned.

Haunted by the easy acceptance,
illusioned by the connective cheekfinger touch,
a sleight of hand, that always reaches
somewhere in time behind closed doors
holding me to you.

I write of meaning...or do I?


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-02-02 08:45 AM


You do, and I loved your words...tremendously affectionate in the wide scope of a universe, you and all that surrounds you, walks with you, embraces you, are signficiant...

You are meaning!!!

Love ya girl....me

choshi
Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
2 posted 2005-02-02 10:19 AM


"...I write of meaning...or do I?"

meaning and emotional intensity so honestly and compellingly intertwined....~P


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-02-02 12:08 PM


you are beauty
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2005-02-02 03:25 PM


“and come tomorrow
another lesson will have been learned”

YEP.  There are those tomorrows
Excellent write.

JL



Opoetry4me
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since 2002-10-11
Posts 126
Dixon, Ky USA
5 posted 2005-02-02 04:22 PM


Expression filled to the overflowing...
I love it! Overflow some more, this is great!


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