I must have been in a 'good' mood when I wrote this

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I must have been in a 'good' mood when I wrote this

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2005-01-30 02:02 PM

Comfort viciously covering your head
Feet untouched by ice frozen by the heat of your passion
Desire customised to expectations
Dreams bought and read
Pictures fading to a Tiger's head
Soul foul read
Pulled from you exposing you naked and scared
Dressing yourself with excuses
You face the truth bared

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

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Michigan

1 posted 2005-01-31 09:12 PM

Hey Dave,
Can't believe nobody commented on this piece.
I like this.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-01-31 09:31 PM

Thanks Froggy but I would have stayed away from me after I wrote this.

Dave

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-01-31 10:42 PM

Good insight~enjoyed your words!

~love and Hugs

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-02-01 04:26 PM

Thanks Romantic.

Dave

MGROVES

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california

5 posted 2005-02-02 01:57 AM

passing shadows
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displaced

6 posted 2005-02-02 12:50 PM

enjoyed

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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7 posted 2005-02-02 12:54 PM

Your mood is infectious. Great one DavePage.

JL

DavePage
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8 posted 2005-02-02 04:33 PM

passing shadows

enjoyed

Thanks Passing -for some reason I really in a foul mood when I wrote this.

Dave

JL

Your mood is infectious. Great one DavePage.

I hope not JL.

I honestly do.

Dave

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