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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Between your life and all the empty letters on this page, Past all the grief, beneath the pain, above the point of rage, Beyond the tears, within the smiles, inside your lonely heart: I see the hope and love it takes to make a brand new start. He was a man of sorrows |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love this Alyssa and am saving it to print out and frame...  M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and this you... this day, and forevermore...hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear... this is just precious |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alyssa, you are beautiful inside and out!  Love & Light, Linda xo |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Happy days are here again! Excellent write. JL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
renewal in the spirit of Candlemas:  With your permission, I'll add a candle for you to my altar tonight. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
the sounds of hope here - as necessary in life as breathing SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ummm...Alyssa? I have to keep this ok? It touches me...deeply. Very deeply. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
GG, This is beyond lovely. You have it girl. best, marty |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a sacred vision to behold and to keep with you at all times |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
M, goodness, I'm honored! Glad you love it, and thank you... mgroves, ... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
LeeJ, hugs, thank you so much. You, too... Dix, glad ya think so. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Linda, you just like seeing a write of mine that has some form of hope in it. lol Thank you!Alli, thanks much Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
JL, maybe not quite happy... but hopeful in this case, yep. And hope is good. Thank you for your reply...Ser, Candemas? Now you're gonna make me go and do reasearch when I'm 4 days into the semester and already behind! Sheesh.  But thank you. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Susan, absolutely. As soon as people really lose hope, they're bodies die. Strange medicine, but it's real. Thanks for your reply. Gentle Spirit, Then this was written for you. Because it's for everyone who felt like they were trapped and couldn't make it through. So thank you for giving it a purpose. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
marty, you're far too kind. Thank you. And I hope all is well with you...inked, glad you think so, and yes... hope is like that. Thank you...Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
GG, It's good to read your poetry again! It just keeps getting better and better! Hey, Lady-- better not let Hallmark see this or they'd nab you on the spot! Have a good weekend! cathy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
GG......A wonderful and uplifting poem! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Cathy, it's good to see you here at all, again! Haha I'm afraid I still have a ways to go before Hallmark wants me. But if they did? I do need a job lol ... you have a good weekend as well! Marti, Thank you I'm glad you liked it... been awhile since I was uplifiting!Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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