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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-02-01 12:35 PM

When the world has been
reduced to a dark night
                     I will find you--
a taste of ashes floating on  air

light&dark, earth&sky      embrace such
beautiful harmony

a single petal made for words --
     this eternal image
of reflection       on   water

tomorrow I will rise early
to touch the faint spread
of sun
,                as the river flows through
my fingers

my dreams of you
exist just for me
                the very depth of edges
from these walls

that rain, will replace your
tears, in language only
you remember:
under stained glass
and woven colors

scattered over the floor

and through the windows
nothing will move

but the daffodils
folding their stems
to die

My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me

© Copyright 2005 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
1 posted 2005-02-01 12:37 PM

dang, what an ending

touching write

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-02-01 12:39 PM

Lord L~ you know how much this one touches my soul.
your grace shines here Lady Lauren.

Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-01 12:43 PM

Loved this, mucho muches.....

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4 posted 2005-02-04 11:20 PM

Absolutely loved this. I know it is an older post...but I missed it the first time around...and I think from the 3 responses it got everyone else did this is going back to the top because dang it people...THIS IS DAMN GOOD!
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5 posted 2005-02-04 11:55 PM

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