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Faint Spread of Sun
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Faint Spread of Sun |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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When the world has been reduced to a dark night I will find you-- a taste of ashes floating on air light&dark, earth&sky embrace such beautiful harmony a single petal made for words -- this eternal image of reflection on water tomorrow I will rise early to touch the faint spread of sun, as the river flows through my fingers my dreams of you exist just for me the very depth of edges from these walls that rain, will replace your tears, in language only you remember: under stained glass and woven colors scattered over the floor and through the windows nothing will move but the daffodils folding their stems to die ~~*~~ My Shadow is the only one that walks beside me ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang, what an ending touching write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lord L~ you know how much this one touches my soul. your grace shines here Lady Lauren.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 Loved this, mucho muches.....  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Absolutely loved this. I know it is an older post...but I missed it the first time around...and I think from the 3 responses it got everyone else did too...so this is going back to the top because dang it people...THIS IS DAMN GOOD! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjooyed...James |
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