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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-02-01 07:56 AM




tiers fall in awe of you

for where the deserving?

not in this mirror

seen are only shadows & doubt
still, your beautiful face
begs near faithfully
each day God bestows

known are pain of years
yet you swallow them into nothing
with the vastness of your spring
garden heart

So many opportunities denied
so many offers of satin & silk
to my rumpled cotton declined
how could I not be in awe?

because

where's the deserving?


~tier

© Copyright 2005 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-02-01 08:24 AM


absolutely beautiful....
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2005-02-01 08:42 AM


Oh, God, Tier, I know this,
I need to send this to someone if that is ok by you.

It is beauty.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
3 posted 2005-02-01 08:46 AM


Thank you LeeJ. *hugs*

Littlewing, thank you too and anytime you'd like to use one of my works, feel free!


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2005-02-01 08:53 AM


Tier, I needed to read this today,
would you mind terribly if I kept this and printed it?  Hugs.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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5 posted 2005-02-01 09:44 AM


Gentle Spirit, thank you and I would be honored!

*hugs*

~tier

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-02-01 01:18 PM


touching write
yes

Ericc
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7 posted 2005-02-01 03:19 PM


Oh wow...!!!

Eric

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