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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-01 12:47 PM

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-02-01 03:29 AM

You, lady, just expressed the inexpressible.

*smile*

I wish I'd found the words. thank you

I thought this stunning.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-02-01 03:39 AM

REALLY FANTASTIC, Snow!

....jo

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2005-02-01 07:02 AM

An incredible picture, and the verse got this country boys heart 'ta beatin' faster...
Just what I need this morning to wake me up..

Beautiful poetry, Snow...enjoyed
__________ice/ford
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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-02-01 09:22 AM

snowy

as he tickled her ribs
and then under her ear

she said
merry me merry me merry me

enjoyed your romance here lady

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-02-01 09:26 AM

I feel so much of what you write Snow,
damn,
this is beautiful..

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-02-01 01:09 PM

damn!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-02-04 11:53 PM

Nice...James

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2005-02-04 11:59 PM

Love it! Yup I do! This is a wonderful poem milady!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2005-02-05 12:39 PM

simply amazing

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2005-02-05 07:35 AM

Gentle, but urgent in the right places, you caress the strings of the heart, with doleful beautiful music as backgound sound...thank you...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2005-02-05 07:58 AM

I marry you, I marry you, I marry you...I know I just saw this somewhere and can't recall which movie...

love your presentations and of course the meanings behind your words...

M

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2005-02-05 09:15 AM

"while we slip through chords...please"

now this is perfect usage of ellipses

(calling all Kamlas)

but yes, lady

this is loving hunger

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

13 posted 2005-02-05 07:20 PM

Very nice!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2005-02-06 10:48 AM

enjoyed

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

15 posted 2005-02-06 12:48 PM

calused hands featherd over silken skin the
ripple of goose bumps go out in lip biting silence. and I I go to bed where I belong. thank you for another stiring write

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2005-02-08 12:52 PM

I wanted to reply to this over the weekend... but my computer kept freezing up on me. *S*

It's one that stays easily on the mind... one that's going into my library for the pleasure of many readings... though I expect each read will end with me thinking "I wish I'd written this." *S*

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