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insidious insensible nonsense |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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i walk the walk of tip-toe balance ten gallon hat of heart upon my head careful don’t trip to do so would spill my heart bled red to puddle to pool only to be washed away gutter spilled dread s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
 oh hell woman i am so all over this! ~~~~~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yep and then we say do I think to much enjoyed this suzz |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ha! agreeing with Dark there, Susan, this is just raw. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, yes, yes...to every line, Susan hugs M |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you friends - and yes, sometimes we think too much -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deep thoughts from the intellect Tremendous |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
deep thoughts from the intellect Tremendous |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome piece! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you most kindly my friends - Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
wow! I have always been impressed with those gifted to say so much in such few words, especially a piece that screams of emotion and power as this! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
short and powerful...not a wasted word among the bunch  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Marcel - Hoot-owl - funny, this was written with a great deal of feeling, and yet, I didn't think it would come across well, it is a pleasant surprise to see that it has done so - thank you so much for your kind replies SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Waited all day to find the right moment to read this... looks like I would have had to stand in line to reply...  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you dear sunshine - for the hug- SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this! LOL! Absolutely! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Kevin - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
YES...yes! Yes... I damned near missed this.... so glad I didn't. Wow lady.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree with all the above! JL |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Donna - for enjoying my spill of heart - Thank you JL for your most agreeable reply  Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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