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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-01-31 07:07 PM



The twinkle in your eyes
the spring your steps
wow what a guy you are
you got me yet.

The way your hands caress me so
dearly,makes me go weak. My eyes
well up this feeling I can not hold
anymore

Till I see you oh what a day that will
be,to feel your lips pressed up agaisnt
mine just one more time.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-01-31 09:02 PM


Sounds like he wont be hitting the Atlantic unless to cool off.

I like the vibrancy.

Dave

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-01-31 11:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
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