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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-01-31 12:15 PM

This burning that bleeds to hold you
for some gentle touch
to light again the spark - -
and I finger softly
the edge of words you
left behind
in this black night
that pulls me from this place

with graceful movement

I turn my head
wondering
if you are there

knowing

it is only memory
woven in ages &some
desire to paint
my eyes
on your bare back
which blends each line
of us together
against the green

perhaps of me too, he paints
pondering the direction of light
finding something beautiful
to place on simple glass

Still untouched of breath
that left us in dance
amidst the gray night

at the edge of river
as I touched that part of you
I begin to softly cry

remembering:

the slip of my name
that flowed across your tongue

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-01-31 12:22 PM

What a lovely photo of you! You are as beautiful on the outside as you are on the inside (which is evident from all of your beautiful poetry!)

Love & Light,
Linda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-01-31 02:12 AM

beautiful write and beautiful new photo too

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-01-31 08:46 AM

geez, this has brought me to tears with the longing L.

beautiful new photo to gal.

The One & Only
Member

since 2005-01-26

Posts 58
Kansas USA

4 posted 2005-01-31 08:52 AM

Very Very Beautiful!!!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

5 posted 2005-01-31 11:21 AM

yes . . . this touches in many ways. beautiful!

Rf

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-01-31 11:36 AM

your words always touch me and evoke such images...truly masterful prose.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-01-31 12:09 PM

it is only memory
woven in ages &some
desire to paint

~*~

Always, always...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2005-01-31 04:59 PM

beauty as always ma'am...

you have always made me sigh..with the way you weave the words...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2005-01-31 10:49 PM

Lauren I love reading your poems, you always know how to satisfy the reader!

Your new photo is great!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-01-31 11:16 PM

that last line is absolutely to die for - what beauty spills from your pen

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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