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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-01-31 02:40 PM



To Hear The Call

Singular seasons come, all the cycles remain
hearken to south winds, to hear the long refrain
streaming through like silver in some golden light
then as if t'were sliver'd, shivers on into the night

Blanketing frost of white, coverlet of earth
passion laying low below, knowing of its worth
receives all what is, yet fights all to live
accepts when to take, and then when to give

Snow goose on wing, breaking through the breeze
still in search of summer, winter offers no release
eye on figure of life's mate, up there in skies blue
faithful through all cycles, a mating of the true

To hear the call, and shed tears of pellucid peace
in giving of one's all, to suffer precious, sweet release

02.10.01


Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-31 02:41 PM


gawd! where do you find that inspiration?
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2 posted 2005-01-31 02:43 PM


To hear the call, and shed tears of pellucid peace
in giving of one's all, to suffer precious, sweet release

beautiful, beautiful.....and yep, my inspiration must be over at your house, cause you got lots

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3 posted 2005-01-31 02:44 PM


To hear the call, and shed tears of pellucid peace
in giving of one's all, to suffer precious, sweet release

Beautiful....

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-01-31 03:20 PM


you are one stimulating writer, this was so beautiful and true, gave me the chills...yup, your words are music or should be...smiles and hugs...thank you
Martie
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5 posted 2005-01-31 04:30 PM


Sissie....This is so very beautiful!
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6 posted 2005-01-31 04:57 PM


nice write
JL
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7 posted 2005-01-31 06:48 PM


Amen to that.

JL

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8 posted 2005-01-31 06:53 PM


Yup, just beautiful Kari.

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
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9 posted 2005-02-01 01:47 AM


"receives all what is, yet fights all to live
accepts when to take, and then when to give"

Much beauty in all your words, sweet SIL!  Hope all's well.   ...jo

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10 posted 2005-02-01 07:06 AM


All one has to do is look at nature with a keen eye, as you have done here, Sunshine...

And you will see all of humanities fears and joys, riding on a snow goose wing and in its dark eye..

You knew I would love this poem, didn't you..

As I most certainly do..

___________ice/ford
   ><>

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11 posted 2005-02-01 03:22 PM


An amazing display of talent and emotion.

Eric

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12 posted 2005-02-01 03:44 PM


Brilliant Sunshine.

Dave

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