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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-31 07:47 AM


Rediscovery

Skills for life
Hope network clears the throat for
Avenues of waiting rooms….
Looking out through windows
Time travel prepares
Sweet land’s narrative powers
Wiggle cooing sounds
Dazzling, summer people
Fly to a white wooden church
Coursing a magnitude of defiance
Overcoming accidental sounds
When ticket agents drove up
Offering black flowers

Looking over morning’s dress
Finding handfuls of pennies on the sidewalk
Main Street leaves a watermark
Promising pure oxygen after midnight
Devouring with provoked vivid adventure
In the middle of nowhere

Emotionally rising to
Challenge notions
Anticipating changes in current &
Landing on shore
Walking with wildcards
Powers of foresight skip insignificant
Showing up a day late

Expect the surprise
It’s warmth and tireless charm
Slightly curled edges around
Red glows of dancing flames

Replenishing reserves
Speaking interactive prestige
Great sagas of uncharted territories
Revealing and reversing
Wheels of life going forward & backward
Sometimes stopping for repair

Peaked and thought provoking
I shall awaken in wilderness gardens
Every moment of life
The peculiar thing is
What is really important frames purpose
know it or not
like it or not
the wheels keep turning
I am a tiny piece of sand
on an endless beach
Of which a wave may turn over only
To carry me away, from all I know

© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-01-31 08:16 AM


LeeJ
That's true, enjoyed the read. Good morning dear.

inkedgoddess
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Ohio
2 posted 2005-01-31 08:22 AM


yes
love the wildcard
never know what or whos going to pop up

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-01-31 08:27 AM


Peaked and thought provoking
I shall awaken in wilderness gardens
Every moment of life
The peculiar thing is
What is really important frames purpose
know it or not
like it or not
the wheels keep turning
I am a tiny piece of sand
on an endless beach
Of which a wave may turn over only
To carry me away, from all I know


you sure pack a wallop in your poems
M

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2005-01-31 09:22 AM


Lee~

'Peaked and thought provoking
I shall awaken in wilderness gardens
Every moment of life
The peculiar thing is
What is really important frames purpose
know it or not
like it or not
the wheels keep turning
I am a tiny piece of sand
on an endless beach
Of which a wave may turn over only
To carry me away, from all I know'


Oh yes ... this is a special, special piece~
I am turning ... ever churning ... upon the endless beaches of time~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-01-31 11:43 AM


this really made me think today...

maybe I'll write about my thoughts at another time

JL
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2005-01-31 06:50 PM


“What is really important frames purpose
know it or not
like it or not
the wheels keep turning
I am a tiny piece of sand
on an endless beach
Of which a wave may turn over only
To carry me away, from all I know”

So true, so true.
Excellent write Lee J.

JL

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-01-31 10:53 PM


Lee~ I needed to read this toady...after reading you, millions of thoughts spin through my head...

Thanks for thinking...

Love and Hugs
~ARh

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In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2005-01-31 11:50 PM


I am a tiny piece of sand
on an endless beach
Of which a wave may turn over only
To carry me away, from all I know''


~


we all feel tiny at times....wishing for that one wave to carry us away...this indeed packs a punch....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

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