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dreaming flora |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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my little haven shall soon be dressed in spring green drape as dew soft meadow with willow boughs weeping newly wrought melody colorful sprites shall dance in yellow daffodil corsets and tulip red gowns laced in delicate lilac tatting finger tips uplifting tracing ray spun gold then shall my heart cry joyous shedding gray cast sorrows redeemed and resplendent in sun lit sentience cowering no longer but strutting and bold oh, Flora! come quickly to waltz upon my lea let your butterflies frolic along pansy sewn streams and across buttercup seas let your fairy spun magic wash a spell over me s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Absolutely love this Susan. LOL! Now who is writing the hot stuff? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmm - am longing for barefeet and soft green grass - not to mention warmth - Thanks Kevin -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
standing there watching her dancing her charms barefoot godiva with the spring song as her woman music her speaks to her eyes "ya'll gonna be long I gotta mow this @#%7^ before lunch or the city will can my ass" |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Oooo.. This makes me want Spring! Kinda hard with 30 below weather. :-) I loved the ending. Beautiful poem. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i wonder if they dream us while we dream them and somehow we meet midway at the spring dance |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
then shall my heart cry joyous shedding gray cast sorrows redeemed and resplendent in sun lit sentience cowering no longer but strutting and bold you put a place in the heart of the reader which smiles flames a glow all warm and friendly.... absolutely beatiful |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you dear friends - for your replies and your eyes, for seeing my dream of Spring-  susanD- ha - not moving till I wanna  If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! much enjoyed! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Dixie and Van - hugs to you both - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Susan you a a very talented poet, I read your poems alot but I don't reply as often as I should...by the way..I am very fond of the little ones myself. I like how you did your photo...very mysterious..or fantasy like... ~love and Hugs ~ARH  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you ARH - would love to dance among the trees again in the meadow lea atop the mountain with shimmering flowers playing amongst the blades of grass beneath the moon's gilded rays - care to join me? Thanks for the compliment on the pic - gotta love photo shop Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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