Open Poetry #34 |
Peter's First Battle |
Paper Boy New Member
since 2005-01-28
Posts 2MA-USA |
This assignment is about the book "The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe" Peter and Aslan were on the hill, Lucy had surely eaten her fill. Then there was the call of a horn, And at that moment a trouble was born. Susan was being chased by Ulf, And at that, Peter was off in a FLULF! Peter took a swish at Sir Fenris, Which put the wolf in a state of madniss. Then Peter quickly used his sword, And the wolf landed on a board. Then Susan came down to see the sea, And after that we were all happy. I'm in the fifth grade and some of my poems are my school assignments. I hope you like them. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very nice touch there Peter. Dave |
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Justine Uff Junior Member
since 1999-10-17
Posts 27 |
I think I read this book once. You've done a good job with this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I just bet you get an A+ on that assignment. Nicely done, graphic and your poem. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, loved this take on that old story. I'm giving you an A+ |
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