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Open Poetry #34

A Simple Simile

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2005-01-30 01:01 PM

starlings,
like licorice q-tips
atop uppermost branches,
clean clusters of cloud cavities
that we might better hear
the thunderous entrance
of the coming spring

©January 30, 2005

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-01-30 02:31 PM

And I say...."bring it on, bring it on"

Dreaming a little VAS?

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-01-30 03:30 PM

I "like" your simple simile ~ and I smile at your Spring sentiments!

Love & Light,
EA

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