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wordwizard
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0 posted 2005-01-30 02:46 AM



Back from the future
where we're sent back to
a ribbon of endless tics
hands sweep a dial face
satiny silk folds
trace points
as lines progress.

Back from a distant self
nab a treasure from mantelshelf.

Back again from yesteryear
cancelled alternate future fear
one where almanacs enforce a win
predicted sequels on a chartered spin

Back again to a distant shelf
recovered from a future self

What ship were we on
when did we set sail?
they said there'd be land
'cause of fog and haze
one couldn't tell.


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1 posted 2005-01-30 08:18 AM



This likes me, Martin...
It certainly had the gentle roll
of being aboard a ship...

wordwizard
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2 posted 2005-01-30 09:58 AM


I had a chance to catch up on another older film 'Back to the Future'  last night, found the script and acting quite entertaining...


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3 posted 2005-01-30 10:07 AM


I like this one!
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4 posted 2005-01-30 12:46 PM


Great write! Enjoyed this very much~

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