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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-01-30 01:00 AM



Happy and not dark
And hope with no light
Distance and time
Just waiting

Entering into this new nature
Sent by an almighty power
Trying to accept and receive it
Bring it to me

Digging up out of myself
Long forgotten, or just ignored...
Maybe even self-denial
Strict refusal

Opening this hole
Pulling it out
Concentrate and focus
Just a little patience
And its happy

Watered and grown
Budding and sprouting
Such percision here
A new piece of a world I've never lived
Bringing it to reality

Poking its head up
Soft light blue
Precious and tender
So easy to break and destroy
Just pulling it up

A spurt of honesty
Test of humility
And developement
Something solid
The sweet scent of her surprise

Free milk and honey
Given to me...
Forced smiles that make my eyes water
That feeling, electric and constant
Undenied shyly open

It pounces on me
The hand of God lowers this precious treasure
Given as freely as love
And it is love,
Overwhelming my fears

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-01-30 01:37 AM


neat write
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2005-01-30 01:42 AM


"A spurt of honesty
Test of humility
And developement
Something solid
The sweet scent of her surprise"

LOL, can be taken many ways. An interesting write, enjoyed reading you.

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3 posted 2005-01-30 12:49 PM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

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green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-01-31 12:39 PM


Thank you.  Oregon huh?  Thats kinda funny...

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

Copperbell
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5 posted 2005-02-13 01:39 AM


I agree - interesting write - its a beautiful life isn't it -
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