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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-01-29 06:46 PM


No stone unturned was left to see or sense
or find among the markers on that hill.
A place to dwell and mourn, no word to mince
for high above a raven flew at will.

He flew the skies and settled on a limb
He gave them cries beyond the chamber door.
His beak was long with dark eyes looking grim
in search a man who swore of nevermore.

But as the day did bring to earth a close
a knock was heard again beyond the pane.
A tattling rap from one in darkened clothes
who came to stay and tap, again...again.

For of the bird of raven lore and fame
few shall in glee whisper it’s chosen name..

© Copyright 2005 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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2 posted 2005-01-29 06:57 PM


...and quoth the sonetteer!! Very nicely done, Barry.

You are tops at giving someone the bird!

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3 posted 2005-01-29 07:57 PM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

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4 posted 2005-01-29 08:49 PM


I love your raven poems, Barry!  
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5 posted 2005-01-29 09:50 PM


Haunting -

One of the most bizarre sights i've ever seen was when living on the mountain, one evening standing out upon the deck, a flock of black birds flew over - you could hear the whoosh of their wings - and they darkend the sky - could swear there were hundreds of them, they just kept coming - almost felt as if the Alfred Hitchcock movie were coming to life - I will never forget that sight - it was freaky -

sorry to go off on a tangent, but your words brought that image vividly to mind

Hugs - Susan

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6 posted 2005-01-29 09:52 PM



Edgar Allen Poe would have been proud! Good one!

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7 posted 2005-01-29 10:07 PM


I think upon your image sent
Whene'er I read your tales and lore
And so I offer this present.
I know I'll not say "Nevermore"

Good to read you.  KJ

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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8 posted 2005-01-30 01:05 AM


I feel a sonnet coming on ....


          as is your norm, true to form.


     Always good to read your thoughts here, Barry!

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9 posted 2005-01-30 03:18 PM


Ah, the Poe-et Man flies again! ~ and very well at that!!!

Huggums,
Linda

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10 posted 2005-01-30 03:19 PM


Ah, the Poe-et Man flies again! ~ and very well at that!!!

Huggums,
Linda

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11 posted 2005-01-30 08:41 PM


Love it magnus!
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12 posted 2005-01-30 08:46 PM


Indeed a very good sonnet.

Poets against the war is redundant

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13 posted 2005-01-30 08:53 PM


A fabulous write, Barry.

Take care.......Sue

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Love is an ocean
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14 posted 2005-01-30 11:30 PM


Great poem Barry~ just tonight, I was watching a biography/movie about Poe, this just topped it off!

~Love and Hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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