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Open Poetry #34

Two lovers of love

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

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uk

0 posted 2005-01-29 11:18 AM

I'd stare upon you as i'd do with the dawn
tracing features where darkness fails
the light giving movement to wary opened eyes
as my hand caresses your face feeling warmth of the light.

The tender kiss warms me none the same but more
as we embrace as one in the shadows
then as two dancing upon the walls in unity.

Baring not the word of love within the breathes
but knowingly knowledge of emotions
strung together in hightened passions
no word could lock these hearts together but the beat.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-01-29 11:19 AM

I like this.

Juju

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2005-01-29 11:39 AM

very sensual

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-01-29 01:16 PM

WOW! no word could lock these two hearts together but the beat!

Loved it!
You are very passionate!

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-01-29 07:47 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-01-30 11:40 PM

Enjoyed...James

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-01-31 12:19 PM

As a lover of love myself, I truly appreciate this sensually sensitive piece of writing. Beautifully expressed!

Love & Light,
EA

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