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0 posted 2005-01-29 08:28 AM


“Red Road-Rage Automobile”
© 2005 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

A new day dawns, with the sound of my alarm clock.
Coffee’s brewing, I’m almost dressed and set to rock.
But then I look, at the car and turn to the sky.
“Hey! Ye Ol’ God? Please be so kind to explain why!
I’m riding in a box, looking like Mr. Bean.
From home to work and back, without making a scene.
Because I can’t effort…

My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”
With smooth leather interior, little devil under the hood
My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”
Got rims with the soul of country, she roars by the press of my foot.
She’s a wow factor on four wheels.
My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”

It’s running but, the engine sounds like a dead duck.
I can barely, carpool alone cause I get stuck.
The front window, fogs up each time I take a breath.
It’s slower than, a person in cardiac rest.
I am a cocktail of, pure benzene hopes and dreams.
She is all I’ve wanted, from when I turned sixteen…
But my pay check can’t reach…

My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”
With smooth leather interior, little devil under the hood
My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”
Got rims with the soul of country, she roars by the press of my foot.
She’s a wow factor on four wheels.
My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”

The clock rings yet again, another morn repeats.
Until I turn towards, my parked car in the drive.
The micro-van is gone, or mutated a bit.
And right in front of me, there she is my dream ride.

My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”
With smooth leather interior, little devil under the hood
My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”
Got rims with the soul of country, she roars by the press of my foot.
She’s a wow factor on four wheels.
My “Red Road-Rage Automobile”

© Copyright 2005 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-29 10:24 AM


mine is a mud grey Pathfinder...with bronchitis cough every AM, a whining tranny ...and country road rock and mud tunes slinging from the rear tires
LOL, enjoyed reading you today

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2 posted 2005-01-29 02:53 PM


Enjoyed this.

~Alli~

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