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Open Poetry #34

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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-28 06:40 PM

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"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-01-28 07:59 PM

Snow

I like the words.

Dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-01-28 08:02 PM

Ow. The words and the image - most powerful and pain laden

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2005-01-28 08:06 PM

Road Trip!!!!!

        ..... beautifully swept.

                         *  S

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2005-01-28 11:51 PM

What an awesome close-up picture of the eyes behind what looks like trees to me. Is this a double exposure??? Anyway, I like your use of the word "whore" here. This is such a strong word and I'm thinking that I'm going to need to incorporate this word into one of my own poems somehow. You used lots of very very good expressive words here, but I liked that word the best. Good job. -Bob

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2005-01-29 08:50 AM

Hi Lady Snow. Hope you are feeling better. Loved this piece. Missing you.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-29 02:48 PM

I just love how your poems always go with a pic...just love it!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-01-29 02:56 PM

Very pretty Snow

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