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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-01-28 07:17 AM

Touching a Berm

Birthstone…a molecular articulation
Beautiful high berms, dancing with life
Primrose oil staring out at silhouettes
Justifies panoramic views
Friendly hills & high tides
Finding positive to cure
Tinsel town is a rural optimist
Wall Street watches a perilous landing
Nomads painting forever homes
Places, to raise children
Between floors and ceilings
Listening to voices of moon dust
Coming from Solar Plexus
Where a million fibers connect
Cause comes back to effect
The seed…shards of colonizing waves
Flipping each page
Curving echoes play in the clouds
Rich marbling of skin rubbing foreheads
Ships of twilight sprawling full length
Standing at the door looking like a redwood
Oxygen worlds polishing questions
Mingling with a floor plan of sun
Wonderful cities smile kudos
Where walkways grow into amber crystal arms
Roadways and paths of humankind

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-28-2005 10:24 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-01-28 07:36 AM

LeeJ
"Oxygen worlds polishing questions
Mingling with a floor plan of sun"
Good morning and have a good floor plan
today.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2005-01-28 08:09 AM

universal solvent
lots of water kills berms

(flashflood 101)

lee j you just keep pulling
the prizes out
are there really any cracker jacks
in that box at all?

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-01-28 08:17 AM

Ships of twilight sprawling full length
Standing at the door looking like a redwood
Oxygen worlds polishing questions
Mingling with a floor plan of sun
Wonderful cities smile kudos
Where walkways grow into amber crystal arms
Roadways and paths of humankind

Lee you have such and amazing way with imagery and I love how you use it.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-01-28 10:18 AM

Wow !!! Lee not only a panoramic view , you give kaleidescope of wonderful images

Hope

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-01-28 10:51 AM

I think you have a magic pen you used to write these wonderful verses.
Extremely well written, Lee J.

JL

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-01-28 12:04 PM

LeeJ

Feeling poetic envy here after reading such a wonderful poem.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2005-01-28 06:39 PM

fantastic~

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