Open Poetry #34 |
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Cold |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England ![]() |
The bed is cold as is the night The love is gone has taken flight The days are dark and colder still no candles glow to chase the chill... The world once shared is filled with frost The game was played who won, who lost? No passionate heat no warmth to hold A heart of ice is oh so cold... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home... ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful and good to read you again...you've been missed.... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Sunshine, it's good to be back. ~S~ Thank you too, LeeJ...it's always nice to come home to good friends...~S~ |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write, my friend and birthday twin... It's so good to see you again! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
such a beautiful ache in this...your words have been missed. So nice to have you home again! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Southern, and it's good to see you again, too!!! ~S~ Thank you, Gentle Spirit, and the ache is one some of us feel this time of year, when the cold sets in....I've missed you all...~S~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I am so glad to see you back, Sunnyone! We have all missed you. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
yes welcome the ache is so strong in this....I know many can relate..... ![]() ~~*~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sue, and thank you...I've missed you too! Hi Greeneyes...yes, this is the part of year that everything seems just out of reach, except for the dear friends in our lives. Thank you...~S~ |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ![]() ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Cold but well written, this is a fine welcome back, welcome back sunny... Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
![]() my kind of poetry, for sure |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have known such feelings as well ~ and fortunately the Sun does come back in to our lives, Dear One With Sun! I feeling like giving you a big, warm, loving hug. Remember, "and this too shall pass"! I say those words repeatedly like a mantra when I am going through difficult times in my own life. I relived ~ and felt ~ every expressive word that you wrote. ![]() Linda |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sunny My heart goes out to you....I feel for you my friend....nice to see you..take care of yourself! ~ARh ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank goodness for fleece blankets ![]() sending you some warm thoughts |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
beautiful poignant poem....Very much enjoyed. glad to be encountering your work...~P |
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