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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2005-01-28 04:10 AM



The bed is cold
as is the night
The love is gone
has taken flight
The days are dark
and colder still
no candles glow
to chase the chill...

The world once shared
is filled with frost
The game was played
who won, who lost?
No passionate heat
no warmth to hold
A heart of ice
is oh so cold...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-28 06:43 AM



Welcome home...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-28 06:45 AM


Beautiful and good to read you again...you've been missed....
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2005-01-28 08:56 AM


Thank you Sunshine, it's good to be back. ~S~

Thank you too, LeeJ...it's always nice to come home to good friends...~S~

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4 posted 2005-01-28 09:20 AM


Beautiful write, my friend and birthday twin... It's so good to see you again! *S*
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-01-28 09:23 AM


such a beautiful ache in this...your words have been missed.  So nice to have you home again!
Sunnyone
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6 posted 2005-01-28 11:09 AM


Thank you, Southern, and it's good to see you again, too!!!  ~S~

Thank you, Gentle Spirit, and the ache is one some of us feel this time of year, when the cold sets in....I've missed you all...~S~

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7 posted 2005-01-28 11:21 PM


I am so glad to see you back, Sunnyone! We have all missed you.
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8 posted 2005-01-28 11:46 PM


yes welcome

the ache is so strong in this....I know many can relate.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Sunnyone
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9 posted 2005-01-29 12:36 PM


Hi Sue, and thank you...I've missed you too!

Hi Greeneyes...yes, this is the part of year that everything seems just out of reach, except for the dear friends in our lives.  Thank you...~S~

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10 posted 2005-01-29 03:11 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

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Goldenrose
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11 posted 2005-01-31 06:12 AM


Cold but well written, this is a fine welcome back, welcome back sunny...

Goldenrose.

Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper).

passing shadows
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12 posted 2005-01-31 11:46 AM


this aches

my kind of poetry, for sure

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2005-01-31 11:55 AM



I have known such feelings as well ~ and fortunately the Sun does come back in to our lives, Dear One With Sun!

I feeling like giving you a big, warm, loving hug. Remember, "and this too shall pass"! I say those words repeatedly like a mantra when I am going through difficult times in my own life.

I relived ~ and felt ~ every expressive word that you wrote.

Big Hug

Linda

vandana
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14 posted 2005-01-31 04:58 PM


nice read
A Romantic Heart
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15 posted 2005-02-01 12:28 PM


Sunny My heart goes out to you....I feel for you my friend....nice to see you..take care of yourself!

~ARh

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Gaia
16 posted 2005-02-02 09:53 AM


thank goodness for fleece blankets
sending you some warm thoughts

choshi
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17 posted 2005-02-02 10:07 AM


beautiful poignant poem....Very much enjoyed.

glad to be encountering your work...~P

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