Open Poetry #34 |
Frustrated (reprint from Dark Poetry) |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Where can one go on ice glazed nights except bar hop on temperate rites thaw chilled through bones as the winter looks peaceful as entrails shudder with frost hold those words for warmer times. What of warmer contacts removed from colder nerves they sought passionate encounters preserved in ice packed freezers cracked with efforts to chill out the winter appears whiter the sea steams a heart aches warmer times. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A heart does ache! ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
come on over to my cousin's bar in Kutztown, PA...it's a blast!!! Tremendous write |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks all for reading Lee, I might be in Philadelphia sooner than I think, where is Kutztown in reference to that? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Martin... This was one of my most favorite of your writes so far. TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Well a belated Happy New Year...I think it just officially signals a step away from the constant rhyming couples that's been so much of my work so far.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done Martin enjoyed this |
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