Open Poetry #34 |
Touch The Page |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Dropping words into silence - Poems disappear. And only echoes reach the fingers. Fading even as they touch the page. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc Exactly so...it feels just like that! I love the way you touch truth so simply. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A stunning write of simple truth... beautiful! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it always amazes me how you can say so much with so few words |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep...you are awesome... this is so cool |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes...that is exactly how it feels...What a wonderful write...so short but so filled... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ I *sigh* when reading the poetic ease of your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Yes, exactly. All my poems feel that way to me lately, and worse, I feel they really don't reach the few people who read them here, or touch so few in the way I intended, that I may as well not have written them. Though it's schadenfreude I have to admit I do feel a bit of comfort in knowing someone else feels it too~~ and says it so well. This may be an echo, but it's a great echo. ~~J [This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (01-30-2005 10:13 AM).] |
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