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Open Poetry #34

Touch The Page

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-01-27 04:36 PM

Dropping words into
silence -

Poems disappear.

And only echoes reach the
fingers.

Fading even as they
touch the page.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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1 posted 2005-01-27 04:45 PM

Ericc

Exactly so...it feels just like that! I love the way you touch truth so simply.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2005-01-27 04:47 PM

A stunning write of simple truth... beautiful! *S*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2005-01-27 05:09 PM

it always amazes me how you can say so much with so few words

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

4 posted 2005-01-27 05:49 PM

yep...you are awesome...

this is so cool

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2005-01-27 06:04 PM

Oh yes...that is exactly how it feels...What a wonderful write...so short but so filled...

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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6 posted 2005-01-27 08:24 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Marge Tindal

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7 posted 2005-01-27 08:45 PM

Eric~
I *sigh* when reading the poetic ease of your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

8 posted 2005-01-30 09:42 AM

Yes, exactly. All my poems feel that way to me lately, and worse, I feel they really don't reach the few people who read them here, or touch so few in the way I intended, that I may as well not have written them. Though it's schadenfreude I have to admit I do feel a bit of comfort in knowing someone else feels it too~~ and says it so well.

This may be an echo, but it's a great echo.

~~J

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (01-30-2005 10:13 AM).]

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