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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-27 07:46 AM


you said be patient
don't hurry me
let me screw myself
into the moment
and then I will
burst forth
like a nude neon
with just the right glow
to burn the hell
from your search for heaven

I listened intently
with my hands in my lap
and my legs crossed
so my foot wouldn't wiggle
and give you the pleasure
of my anticipation
and frustration
at having to wait
for what I wanted
more than I needed

and then you put me on hold


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whiskey
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1 posted 2005-01-27 07:49 AM


aarrhhh waiting can be frustrating good writing
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-01-27 08:03 AM


at having to wait
for what I wanted
more than I needed

your amazing...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-01-27 08:43 AM


with just the right glow
to burn the hell
from your search for heaven

I listened intently
with my hands in my lap
and my legs crossed

~*~

Patience...
is a hellacious virtue...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-27 11:28 AM




  susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2005-01-27 11:54 AM


well done
Martie
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6 posted 2005-01-27 12:24 PM


DS

Patience usually pays off in the end.  

SEA
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with you
7 posted 2005-01-27 01:26 PM


"you said be patient
don't hurry me
let me screw myself
into the moment
and then I will"


being patient always pays off...

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2005-01-27 02:07 PM


you want something to hold
cum here baby
i'll give you something to hold

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
9 posted 2005-01-27 03:24 PM


Love it.
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

10 posted 2005-01-27 03:42 PM


and they say patience is a virtue...

the real question is answered when we learn if the wait was worth it....

Loved it D.

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British Columbia, Canada
11 posted 2005-01-27 04:01 PM


I had an entirely different vision, LOL, and thought of hanging up the phone!     Great write Dark.
Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

12 posted 2005-01-27 04:03 PM


Didn't know you were a foot wiggler... *wink*

Oh, yeah. You got the power, babe.

Indigo

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13 posted 2005-01-27 11:16 PM



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