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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said be patient don't hurry me let me screw myself into the moment and then I will burst forth like a nude neon with just the right glow to burn the hell from your search for heaven I listened intently with my hands in my lap and my legs crossed so my foot wouldn't wiggle and give you the pleasure of my anticipation and frustration at having to wait for what I wanted more than I needed and then you put me on hold ____________________ dark |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
aarrhhh waiting can be frustrating good writing  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
at having to wait for what I wanted more than I needed your amazing... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
with just the right glow to burn the hell from your search for heaven I listened intently with my hands in my lap and my legs crossed ~*~ Patience... is a hellacious virtue... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
  susanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Patience usually pays off in the end.  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you said be patient don't hurry me let me screw myself into the moment and then I will" being patient always pays off...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you want something to hold cum here baby i'll give you something to hold |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Love it. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and they say patience is a virtue... the real question is answered when we learn if the wait was worth it.... Loved it D. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had an entirely different vision, LOL, and thought of hanging up the phone! Great write Dark. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Didn't know you were a foot wiggler... *wink* Oh, yeah. You got the power, babe. Indigo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
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