Open Poetry #34 |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
You A picture is a story of patience and dreams, Poetic in its own sleeping reality, Where beauty transcends almost sadly, Within the glassy walls of irises, Only to be forgotten when the eve blinks to tomorrow. Yesterday I lay on the clouds, Eyes closed, Hoping and imagining a future, With this brown skinned queen Who set my soul on fire; It was not only here outer beauty That stirred the passions of my soul, But also her sweet essence That kissed away my fears And comforted my lonely dreams. This evening I lay under the stars, Eyes watery, under the glow of the moon; In my hand I glimpse her picture And my tears smile as I think of her. I pray for her realness to the stars --- A wish not only captured in the quietness of the Heavens, But also in her picture that bids my heart to sing of love. Marcel |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
just beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is kind of sad, marcel, but very romantic too |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
pictures often hold our dreams captive in their image - enjoyed this - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! this was very lovely, I do so love romantic poetry! YES!!!!!!! ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
serenity hath consumed my disposition this evening as i've completed reading this poem. A lovely write. nice use of muffin |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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