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marcel
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az, usa

0 posted 2005-01-27 12:56 PM



You

A picture is a story of patience and dreams,
Poetic in its own sleeping reality,
Where beauty transcends almost sadly,
Within the glassy walls of irises,
Only to be forgotten when the eve blinks to tomorrow.

Yesterday I lay on the clouds,
Eyes closed,
Hoping and imagining a future,
With this brown skinned queen
Who set my soul on fire;
It was not only here outer beauty
That stirred the passions of my soul,
But also her sweet essence
That kissed away my fears
And comforted my lonely dreams.

This evening I lay under the stars,
Eyes watery, under the glow of the moon;
In my hand I glimpse her picture
And my tears smile as I think of her.
I pray for her realness to the stars ---
A wish not only captured in the quietness of the Heavens,
But also in her picture that bids my heart to sing of love.

Marcel

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1 posted 2005-01-27 09:02 AM


just beautiful!
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2 posted 2005-01-27 09:05 AM


this is kind of sad, marcel, but very romantic too
Susan
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3 posted 2005-01-27 01:42 PM


pictures often hold our dreams captive in their image -

enjoyed this -

Susan

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4 posted 2005-01-27 11:14 PM


WOW! this was very lovely, I do so love romantic poetry!

YES!!!!!!!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Don_Juan
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5 posted 2005-01-27 11:27 PM


serenity hath consumed my disposition this evening as i've completed reading this poem.
A lovely write.

nice use of muffin

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6 posted 2005-01-27 11:59 PM


beautiful


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