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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-01-26 01:57 PM


EverBend

In radiant dance,
her spinning of a rainbow
down to buckets of gold
doesn’t surprise me

I swear, she talks
to leaves
just to hear them giggle
in childlike wonder

as flowers unfurl
just to see if she is following
their evolution

she is eagerness of small fingers
in stare of them to curl
around her own

she is a bear hug in hold
of silvery filaments and other affairs

a motion of poet is in her step
and her smile

is the cradle at the foot of the mountain,
a hammock of life
that swings song into mystery

as one cascades deep into dark eyes
hearing her mouth the sound of
friend

knowing it is you
she speaks to…

but for all of this
and more
I cherish her, because I know
she values me

she is poet, she is friend
she is Martie in ever-bend…

         


A repost...
because she is even more...
© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-26 02:16 PM

Incredibly lovely. *S*
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2 posted 2005-01-26 02:29 PM

A tribute to and from fine women.

Poets against the war is redundant
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3 posted 2005-01-26 02:34 PM

This is incredibly descriptive of her and a beautiful write.  Ken

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light
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4 posted 2005-01-26 02:35 PM

can I ditto suthern? *very knowing nod* she just loves it when I do....

really pretty.....to be seen this way by another and especially by a poet that can write someone to be this enchanting...well this speaks volumes of you both
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5 posted 2005-01-26 03:25 PM

Awwww...sissie...bless you for this!  You are wonderful!  
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6 posted 2005-01-26 03:29 PM

Beautiful of beautiful....what else can I say?

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LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-01-26 03:51 PM

I swear, she talks
to leaves
just to hear them giggle
in childlike wonder


oh how wonderfully pretty this is, as is your new picture and your heart.  Thank you for sharing
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8 posted 2005-01-26 04:13 PM

Really good.   Love the dance and flower child in it.

Dave
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9 posted 2005-01-26 05:59 PM

lovely, lovely, lovely~~~the both of you


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10 posted 2005-01-27 08:40 AM

I swear, she talks
to leaves
just to hear them giggle
in childlike wonder

as flowers unfurl
just to see if she is following
their evolution
===========================

loving these verses that capture her lovely spirit.

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB
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11 posted 2005-01-27 08:45 AM

Sunshine
She is sunshine again.
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12 posted 2005-01-27 09:04 AM

Everything is here in this poem that I admire most, and is valuable to me....beauty, grace and truth..

Call me dreamer, but I have strong feelings that it is poems like this, about people like the subject, by poets like the poet, that will allow the human race to survive.

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14 posted 2005-01-27 04:32 PM

Beautiful tribute!

Eric
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15 posted 2005-01-27 08:32 PM

Beautiful!

~Alli~

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16 posted 2005-01-27 08:38 PM

OMG Kari, how beautiful and loving from one special lady to another. You are blessed in one anothers friendship. you both!
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17 posted 2005-01-27 08:42 PM

precious indeed!

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18 posted 2005-01-27 11:50 PM

Very nice...James
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