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DEPRESSION
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DEPRESSION |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Depression Black clouds breathe scars Onto a castrated sun lighted Impotent, horse-leg hobbled Tripping speech, thoughts and Dulled wit severed Tongue licking the hand Of slowest death. Robert |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hope this isn't how you feel...but if it is...know that I know how that is~~  M |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I have never felt this bad.....as I have lately Just riding it out and hoping for spring and more sunshine. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ouch... and yes, you described it well. I hope you never do feel this bad... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh damn.... damn this is good, robert. don't edit. i'd like to print it out, if i may. S~ "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I have been there Robert....yes...you have described the misery well. Just breathe and know that things have to change - when we say "enough is enough!" hugs, Chris |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
"Otherwise" by Jane Kenyon Publisher: Graywolf Press ISBN 1555972667 |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Painfully descriptive, this stiletto sting of a write. This is a chin to chest dirge walk. Please take some comfort in knowing you aren't alone in this gloomy miasma. Write it out, this was good. Poets against the war is redundant |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The mind is a powerful place. But it does belong to you. Take charge, have hope. Spring is just around the corner. New growth soon will be at hand. God Bless! JL  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I knew you all would understand... it is part of the poet.... it IS the poet. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Spring and Sunshine - yes - my heart overflows in understanding - big hugs and sunny smiles - somehow we always find our way back out - and then life is good again - susanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm sending you a warm fireplace of summer days, with a cool ocean breeze....a reese's peanut butter blizzard from Dairy Queen, and two free tickets to the Super Bowl IF you promise to root for the Eagles..hehe Feel better? hope so adding, whata gripping write.... Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep...I understand this well |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yep... all that. Hugs and understanding to you... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes, it is just that. |
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