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Melancholy Ache
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Melancholy Ache |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Melancholy Ache  Drops of melancholy silently fall from emerald eyes crystallized in tears from blue sullen and forlorn as mask holds the unveiling of truth,. Melancholy is a heart ache of love misplaced harbored in yesterday; vanished without nary a trace held in a longing for what once had been to someday return to her heart again. (my thanks to Kari for framing the photo and allowing me some storage space. Hugs) The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... "She never let it show from the outside looking in nobody could have known she didnt cry she didnt shout I was blind but I see now she was breaking from the inside out." {sung by Tracy Lawrence} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-21-2005 10:28 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhh my, this was sooooo beautiful |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely, Donna and very meaningful~~ hugs M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmm kewl stuff... I like the graphic. and the poem |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Donna , your words and picture described just of it feels , smiling on the outside and crying within Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful work, m'friend, on both the art, and the thought from which it came... it was always there, wasn't it... the poem in the picture. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks everyone so much. You are all to sweet. Yes Kari, I did this picture a few years ago and always felt it had something to say. I guess my muse finally figured out what that was....lol. Thank you for giving me the chance to post it here. Hugs |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
excellent write... cute new photo, too! K |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best writes...  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautifully done -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ How tenderly your thoughts caress the page~ LOVELY~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I don't think I've ever read something by you that I didn't love! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I loved your words they are saying what my heart is feeling... Beautiful spirit! Love and hugs~ARH  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes, beautifull |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
This was awesome Aunt Donna, I still have that picture hanging on my wall..The poem fits it well. Great write. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone. Staci, I remember when you liked mine so much you wanted to do one of your own. Yep, mines still up too. Wonderful inspiration, this lady with a tear huh? Hugs. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Howevever fleeting love is, at least it was, or felt that way. You write the ache beautifully, Donna~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori hon, sorry for the delay in reply. Thanks so much dear. The ache is one far to well known to far to many..... HUGS |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is stunning... both for its beauty... and for its truth. Both words and painting are fantastic, my friend... this touching presentation is art at its best. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suthern gal, you have no idea how much that means to me. I think that love and the ache of love is pretty much a universal language! Hugs to you and much thanks. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It speaks with painful beauty...A stunning poem with an equally stunning image... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karen it is so very good to see you again and your words are so appreciated. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
'painful beauty', yes that fits perfectly, both the picture and the poem, your talent shines with them both thank you for sharing this with me |
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