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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-26 08:41 AM



ice cubes between the knuckles
of the mind

like holding hands
over the fire
listening to rain drops die
when they fall from love
like saliva

the hound pants
for the gypsy
and the steam rises
where they make windows
in the snow
of white washed walls

and rub their sins
into the dust
from some tomorrow's memory
wrapped in velvet
with hard insides

I bring you cocoa now
and we let our backs touch
with one heart between
I wear your hair
on my shoulders

you say my hands are warm

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-01-26 08:48 AM



All of your poetry is amazing...
this one happens to be tinged
with beautiful.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-26 08:48 AM


A pleasing quality associated with harmony of meditation, excellence in craftsmanship, truthfulness, originality....the who of you....allows you to indulge in your own dimension...confident and most internally attractive...to all, men and women alike...

Tremendous morning read that you grace us with...

  

loved this....

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-01-26 11:24 AM


upon terrace warm
beneath the gaze of Ra
the reeds whisper wonderful
the river heart runs deep
the chocolate is savored
against the soothe of you

beautiful D- absolutely

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2005-01-26 11:51 AM


sunshine, bless you sweet lady
for your touch


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lee j, you are a whisper of soft warm, thank you

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suzzsin, let the sun king worship
our sinful blending
til he stirs the sands
and blinds his own eyes
dare we dance love again

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