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Open Poetry #34

Sponge on the Table

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-01-26 08:33 AM

Invention brave in perspective
Like snow packs melting
Taking aggressive steps
I am a ring for contending thoughts
A positive judgment for potential
Sparking insightful wings
If I choose
Where bridges meet
Leaving behind what was memorable
The spirit focuses on external history
Nature and prayer’s petition
Affective contemplations take my hand
Composing a landscape
Thus becomes an escape
For the rejected
Will speaks my name
In a placeless time
Catching the elective creating new affirmatives
And where I am in this world of things
It is from desolation my hand speaks
The shining foil of energy
In mental prayer, from which
Oil oozes searing trade
Smeared with barren waves
I find character in morning sky
An impulse to lift up all hearts eyes
To feel the sharp intensity of a new
Soul groping light heartedly
Lifting to the next quatrain of sound
Symbolic bitterness tastes my despair
Where hope anticipates from morsels
Soul is delivered to a final phase
Leave me ferment my ways
Foregoing end rhymes
Entering a critical mission
We are the cosmic barons….

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-26 08:34 AM

I find character in morning sky
An impulse to lift up all hearts eyes
To feel the sharp intensity of a new

I wake up every morning with those thoughts in mind~~ at least I try

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2005-01-26 08:37 AM

Lee, this was totally awesome!

~tier

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-01-26 11:05 AM

"cosmic baron"

That you are Lee J.

Excellent write!

JL

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