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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2005-01-26 08:33 AM


Invention brave in perspective
Like snow packs melting
Taking aggressive steps
I am a ring for contending thoughts
A positive judgment for potential
Sparking insightful wings
If I choose
Where bridges meet
Leaving behind what was memorable
The spirit focuses on external history
Nature and prayer’s petition
Affective contemplations take my hand
Composing a landscape
Thus becomes an escape
For the rejected
Will speaks my name
In a placeless time
Catching the elective creating new affirmatives
And where I am in this world of things
It is from desolation my hand speaks
The shining foil of energy
In mental prayer, from which
Oil oozes searing trade
Smeared with barren waves
I find character in morning sky
An impulse to lift up all hearts eyes
To feel the sharp intensity of a new
Soul groping light heartedly
Lifting to the next quatrain of sound
Symbolic bitterness tastes my despair
Where hope anticipates from morsels
Soul is delivered to a final phase
Leave me ferment my ways
Foregoing end rhymes
Entering a critical mission
We are the cosmic barons….


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-01-26 08:34 AM


I find character in morning sky
An impulse to lift up all hearts eyes
To feel the sharp intensity of a new


I wake up every morning with those thoughts in mind~~ at least I try

M

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2005-01-26 08:37 AM


Lee, this was totally awesome!

~tier

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2005-01-26 11:05 AM


"cosmic baron"

That you are Lee J.

Excellent write!

JL


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