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Open Poetry #34

Form Divine - Inspired by NakedThoughts

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-01-26 07:38 AM

The form divine, my conflicts and cares
What flame supplies in numbers
To which my thoughts may soar
Invade these restless eyes
Knowing by what force my life abides
Immortal rhymes gratify to each his own
To each his own, may come a jewel
Thus complimented by whom?
What burdens carry where sun gives light?
Doth a loving heart complain or errors naught?
A humble voice becomes the beggar
Of life, of love
My poverty brings death to reason
Can your eyes move words to stay?
Beyond my dark complexion
Beyond my woman’s ways
Beyond my raven hair
You say I am a pearl?
But pearls are lost
Sometimes ardent…spilling blood
But by the flaws of noble verse
Comes the rose of friendships
Can you love me in summer cold
Or winter’s warmth
Can you find peace in who you are?
So much so, that your not blind
In amorous air
And I vow love tender and equal
Love in life and death, though I am still with you
Share with me the herbs of hope
The flowers of sighs
Grow with me my love
Plough the fields of moan
Love for nature
Embracing both...
Soft beauty and intellectual depth
Where design takes place
Ignite inspiration and creativity
Unbridled enthusiasm and energy
To a higher level of moments
Making us complete

and this is what you own

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2005-01-26 07:46 AM

the Wynter does inspire so!!!

.... and with such warmth!

Excellent write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-01-26 08:31 AM

smiing at the truth you write...

besides that, my birthstone is a pearl~~

much to think about in your writings, Lee

thank you
M

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2005-01-26 08:40 AM

A treasure....a triumph....words look up to their mistress...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper).

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-01-26 08:51 AM

LeeJ
Your words echo in the canyons of understanding. Good morning sweet.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-01-26 11:03 AM

You are a shining star with this write Lee J.
A divine write!

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-26 09:22 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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