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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-26 06:13 AM

In the Mood of When

I adopt your nature
never assuming what isn't there,
as I carry a heavy heart
always waiting for that breeze
to touch me, raise me
to lips that press their want,
frustration embedded into the mood
of when.

These early morning thoughts,
awakened by the lack of you,
that fine line so close to erasure
while trying to make it have
some permanence, leaves me
in a seasonal freeze.

To be reflected upon, a wish.
To know the edge of you
seeks the reason of me.
To feel the heat and not the smoldering
that suppresses each outcome,
knowing I am only
a phone call away.

Why does a heart
have to be embraced in silent words
instead of eye to eye dancing,
instead of by the side of your touch,
instead of authoring our own poetry...

I close my eyes to view
what is yet to come,
to erase the darkness that encircles them,
to bring that smile back
and to know the rhythm of life.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-26 07:11 AM

I believe love is everything spiritual, and the physical side of love is simply, to me...a comodity which God gave us to experience....love is tender, reassuring, kind, giving and taking...trust, and wanting more for the other then for self...can two people go the distance....laying all physical need aside and evaluating who and what would make up your soul mate...a good fit...a team...as compatibility is also an attribute that would compliment the couple. Sex is and can be a very nice part of love, but is certainly not the whole of what love is...and you, have articulated all these things well...Yes, love is also moods...and two people are not always on the same plain all the time...

One of the best reads I've ever experienced...thank you for your intellectual awareness of life, love and companionship...bless you and keep you always....you will indeed flourish...that I know...hugs

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-01-26 07:53 AM

I believe that "true" love is unspeakable ...

           ... no words can truly fill its meaning complete
               for there would be no need for them to be.

                     ... as I find myself here speechless ...

                        beautiful!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-01-26 08:15 AM

Thank you Lee..you always have such good insight...

Reloving, or learning to love again is not such an easy thing for me...

when you have been with someone all of your adult life and then lose that someone to whatever reason, the shock of the times makes it that much harder to begin again and to accept all the changes that have occurred during those years to make a new beginning possible...set in my ways, my once contented ways, leaves me at a great loss.

Thank You Craig, for you words of friendship

hugs
M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-01-26 10:02 AM

you have understanding of yourself..the rest will come again..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2005-01-26 01:27 PM

Heart-ripping, wrenching, write. Well-written emotion.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-01-26 01:30 PM

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2005-01-26 05:26 PM

ohhhhhh...I just give up!!!

a repost:

Meant for You

Relief
from the cold world
that possesses you
For eyes
to open wide
and see the truth in blue
That someday
when it comes
you'll know it's really true
And grab it
while you can
the love that's meant for you

M
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2005-01-26 05:53 PM

Soft words...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2005-01-26 06:27 PM

"These early morning thoughts,
awakened by the lack of you,
that fine line so close to erasure
while trying to make it have
some permanence, leaves me
in a seasonal freeze.

To be reflected upon, a wish.
To know the edge of you
seeks the reason of me.
To feel the heat and not the smoldering
that suppresses each outcome,
knowing I am only
a phone call away."

I love this
honest to goodness perfection

[This message has been edited by SEA (01-26-2005 10:28 PM).]

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2005-01-26 09:03 PM

Wow M.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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