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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, some very heavy metal... this was exquisite.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
After reading your response to a poem I liked tremendously... that it reminded you of your work... I made note to look for you. *S* I'm glad I did... This is fantastic!! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
SNOW, So much said in such few words. Silence is deadly, it can hurt or break one. Nice presentation. Ejoyed this, thank you ,marty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would even take the avalanche of whispers  M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
woah. this is good. Happy 2005! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You amaze me- Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I know a lot about silence this week. It has been awfully quiet lately. I feel like the world has passed me by. LOL! This is good Snow. Okay it is better than good...it is fantastic! Bravo! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Have you ever whispered at the edge of a canyon where such words can actually be felt ... I can feel this. excellent work  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Words barren, idea understood... thank you... Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Snow, I like this. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
few words speak loudest |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
putting a sheet over his head, he tiptoed up behind her and when she turned he shouted loud "boo" I like your work snowy one |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Mesmerizing, to say the least. JL |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sometimes silence is good, too many people put their foot in their mouths and say things out of anger before thinking...silence gives that time to calm down and to think...then talk things over with a more mature attitude. Some poeple should remain invisible, for all they want to do is destroy, destruct, and harm~  Words cut like a knife~ ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
again i feel my breath leaving....so few words, such a powerful statement annie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yes |
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