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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-25 03:10 PM

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-25 03:18 PM

whew, some very heavy metal...

this was exquisite....

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2005-01-25 03:24 PM

After reading your response to a poem I liked tremendously... that it reminded you of your work... I made note to look for you. *S* I'm glad I did... This is fantastic!!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2005-01-25 03:28 PM

SNOW, So much said in such few words. Silence is deadly, it can hurt or break one.
Nice presentation. Ejoyed this, thank you ,marty

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-01-25 03:41 PM

I would even take the avalanche of whispers

M

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-25 07:00 PM

woah. this is good.

Happy 2005!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-01-25 08:30 PM

You amaze me-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

7 posted 2005-01-26 06:25 AM

I know a lot about silence this week. It has been awfully quiet lately. I feel like the world has passed me by. LOL! This is good Snow. Okay it is better than good...it is fantastic! Bravo!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2005-01-26 08:04 AM

Have you ever whispered at the edge of a canyon

        where such words can actually be felt


                  ... I can feel this.

                            excellent work

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

9 posted 2005-01-26 08:35 AM

Words barren, idea understood...

thank you...

Goldenrose.

Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper).

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

10 posted 2005-01-26 01:09 PM

Hey Snow,
I like this.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

11 posted 2005-01-26 06:09 PM

few words speak loudest

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2005-01-26 06:42 PM

putting a sheet over his head, he tiptoed up behind her and when she turned he shouted loud "boo"

I like your work snowy one

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

13 posted 2005-01-27 03:40 PM

Mesmerizing, to say the least.

JL

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

14 posted 2005-01-28 12:44 PM

Sometimes silence is good, too many people put their foot in their mouths and say things out of anger before thinking...silence gives that time to calm down and to think...then talk things over with a more mature attitude.

Some poeple should remain invisible, for all they want to do is destroy, destruct, and harm~

Words cut like a knife~
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

15 posted 2005-02-07 12:55 PM

again i feel my breath leaving....so few words, such a powerful statement
annie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2005-02-07 01:25 PM

oh yes

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