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Open Poetry #34

jag lady # 2

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-05 06:59 AM

I watched jag again
with the sound off
and you on

wearing the marine suit
better than her
but you said it was warm

and you didn't need it
to be a star
in my kind of movie

and you said you loved
the plot and the plotting
and could I just tape it

for later when you were done
______________

dark

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-02-05 07:16 AM

always a treat...

~smiling~
M

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-02-05 11:41 AM

Salute - sir, thank you, sir - for this bit of fantasy fun-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-02-05 03:45 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-02-07 07:20 AM

awwww, another precious write by you...enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-02-07 01:22 PM

nice

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