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Coruscating Concerto Of Love
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Coruscating Concerto Of Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Coruscating Concerto Of Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ In the softest twi-of-night I will come once more to play my sexy wooing song on bare skin of sweet adore~ Finger serenade will trickle Moving us slowly through desire finding the all of you in melt of hush on fire~ You will know the feel of me from dream into the morn I will come once more to feather you, softly borne~ Lift you higher than you have been Ahhh, then I'll do it again~ Word of the Day for Tuesday January 25, 2005 coruscate \KOR-uh-skayt\, intransitive verb: 1. To give off or reflect bright beams or flashes of light, to sparkle. 2. To exhibit brilliant, sparkling technique or style. ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What a wonderful presentation, and excellent poem. JL |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent. Love the work you did to make it "sparkle" marty |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This definitely sparkles, talented lady. *S* But it's the tenderness that takes it straight into my heart... You will know the feel of me from dream into the morn Beautiful... yes! *S* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is lovely marge. Yes, sparkling just like a woman in love. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love the new pic...and the poem as well...wonderfully written |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such a tantalizing teaser you pen! Well done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
You are a creative darling!!!! What a delight. Barb |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 This is just so beautiful and amazing! I absolutly love the "sparkle" you added to it!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is very sensual and lovely. Great use of the word. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I will come once more to feather you, softly borne~ If only in thought, that gets the best of our dreams. Thank you for sharing the passion, and your endless loverly, Marge~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Never know what to expect from you! But always, always you write with tender beauty.  Great job, Marge. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
another beauty~ as your heart |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is just beautiful Marge. You know I love it. Betty |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
careful young lady the ink you lay down is blinding the readers in sparkels of love many seldom ever know.(you lucky dog)what a great write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwww, you all are SO SWEET ... thank you very much~ And ... this one is daily/nightly inspired in my loved one's arms~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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