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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Erotic misery dreams under fingers Diary transforming darkness Poetry composing blank verse To the best of my knowledge Climbing winter’s weight Truth has spoken Fingers froze and bleeding Cutting corners of doubt Historic ambiance and moonlight In a whirlpool tub With migrating dolphins Going south Big empty spaces know dawn Silence speaks an amazing grace Laughing hysterically Chest deep in a slow dance With undiscovered cities Tonight a wilderness arises Elegantly conceived from a story Images domesticated Perpetually hopeful In the world of a surrealist Arousing intellect Building them one by one With instinct for survival Subtle chemistry Lifts above the transgressed Admirably and precise More human than any wannabe raincoat I forgive you, illusions Where a stream of consciousness arrives In direct path with self |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Truth has spoken Fingers froze and bleeding Cutting corners of doubt those and each of the other lines bring so many thoughts to mind... hugs M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ From delusions comes illusions, good morning sweet. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful write Lee J. Enjoyed! JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great job! Happy 2005! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent, as always - just love this: In a whirlpool tub With migrating dolphins Going south oh, yes - just love it - so creative Hugs -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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