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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-01-24 08:04 PM



To me the sky scrapers
are the ancient mountains
And lights from a distance
are really small pixies.

A symphony kisses
The edges of my ear
While the small cars flow
Like the once great rivers
Before we tamed them all

Its funny how I feel this
I guess I am in love

-Juju


Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (01-25-2005 06:12 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-01-25 09:46 AM


enjoyed the imagery, Juju
(spelling: scrapers, not scrappers, and mountains)

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-25 11:03 AM


no matter how it's spelled...I like each and every word....lovely dear juju
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-01-25 06:09 PM


I think so...Jams
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-01-25 06:13 PM


Thank you every one I am glad you like it.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

*Alli4000*
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5 posted 2005-01-25 06:59 PM


Nice one Juju.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2005-01-25 11:31 PM


Thanx

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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