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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2005-01-24 02:41 PM

fire blazes
on the
                                      horizon
of my being

nearly in reach...

yet...

falling
          just
                 short

         of my

                                       dignity

as ashes
           cut
    my
          face

in tear-stained
                etchings
           of

this...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-01-24 03:03 PM

vlraynes
Good write, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-01-24 03:03 PM

I hate this and sometimes even that

hugs
M

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2005-01-24 03:21 PM

Thank you, Sy...

and Maureen?...

me too...

hugs back atcha...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-24 03:37 PM

Excellent portrayal of
ache, m'friend...

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-24 06:25 PM

Nicely written!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2005-01-24 06:45 PM

Pass me the Excedrin please...sheesh, a
toothache would feel quite nice.

Well written V. good one.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2005-01-24 06:51 PM

This

was so beautifully said...

~tier

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2005-01-24 08:19 PM

Vicky~

'falling
          just
                 short

         of my

                                       dignity'

I, too, know this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2005-01-24 11:34 PM

Very impressive Lady V...

and you are almost as cute as him too!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2005-01-25 02:57 PM

falling
          just
                 short

         of my

                                       dignity

From an excellent whole, these words cling to my memory... great write!!!

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