Open Poetry #34 |
The Light Continues |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The Light Continues They say it curves at lengths where numbers fail, past sparkling stars, beyond the infinite where minds see only dark, and failing quail before the thought of distance read as time. Still it may find those regions at the rim, the rays from heathen torches reach and warm dark matter at the brink of Night, too dim for eyes to read the heat where it began; or arching further still return, complete the ring and warm this place again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... I borrowed a technique from a friend of mine... the chance to be first responder is rare... and treasured. *G* And... how could I hurry when you've given so much to enjoy and ponder? *S* Your internal rhymes are so smooth they're almost invisible... but... they add to a perfect whole. *S* I love this... curve to arc to completion... Your words are like light, my friend... they warm, they brighten... they make the day. *S* Excellent write!!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This one a "discovery" of sorts -- when I first joined PIP, I didn't post everything I wrote, but I thought I'd eventually gotten around to it.....this one written a couple of weeks after I joined, two years ago today. I have looked into my (brand new!) crystal ball...and I see a prospecting expedition in my near future..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If you've more treasures like this lying around... get to prospecting, mister! LOL You know I'm greedy... *G* So share those treasures... they're priceless. *S* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've been away for several days... and in my attempts to catch up, I buried this gem. *S* Sorry, my friend... back to the top with it!* S* |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Love it Buddy! Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ed, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece of found treasure from your personal archives. A great write, good one! |
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