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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2005-01-23 11:44 PM

The many of them
Masses of them
Each one different

From the military
To the coffee shops and bums
And the coffin

They are all the same
Different looks,
Different ways of stride and path

Happy ones and sad ones
Articulate and battered wall of the prisons

Solo beautiful mixed together as a whole
Intricate in this picture that has always moved

And always will even after
The last one has perished to a quiet sleep
Or violent death from which he or she will
Never wake

The hand which paints these pictures is a beauty
I'll never understand
And yet I doubt I'll ever fully accept that fact
And for the rest of my life
Use it as my stride and path
To explain how I look and the emotion statement of
The solo life I live in the midst of masses

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2005-01-24 02:03 AM

beautiful....=) - add

- River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-01-24 01:27 PM

itchy...a wonderful write
enjoyed reading this perspective

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-01-24 07:28 PM

Great one!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2005-01-24 08:13 PM

I like your name. Lol. Awsome poem too.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2005-01-25 07:02 PM

Thank you everybody. I've been posting in dark for a while so its cool to see what I write is appreciated.

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2005-01-26 11:21 PM

you dont walk the path alone, there are many walking beside you.....enjoyed good to see you in open...

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

7 posted 2005-01-27 07:57 AM

Yeah, I guess this run in open is experimental, and I'm not exactly sure what I'm experimenting about, but it seems pretty cool so far, so thanks.

=GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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