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Have Another |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Have Another Waking in the warmth of thoughts, morning carrying over the night with solitude on standby. One step away from the dance recovering my composure manipulation not getting the best of me. Protected by your words against others, the knifing only momentary when reminding, it too shall pass and the pain will cease come each morning's rise. It only takes one drink, and only one suggestion and thrown are the stones that crack my mirror breaking my security. Those sharp edges scrape, and the wordweight bruises but my skin is tougher now and bruises will eventually fade. I grieve the loss of understanding, the sharing and caring of years. Someday you will be unmasked and the old you will come through but it won't be me who is here waiting. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
words can surely hurt as such...and you've described the pain they can cause someone to the "T" Tremendous write and visuals....thank you |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nor would he deserve to have you standing in wait! You are quite the writer ~ and the woman ~ Ms. Wynter!  Love, Peace & Harmony, EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriend~ This one singes the page~ *Huglets* to you~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
from the other side, this hurts but I guess the truth is painful at times glad I went back and found this one M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
wow. amazing write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I grieve the loss of understanding, the sharing and caring of years. Someday you will be unmasked and the old you will come through but it won't be me who is here waiting. A sad write, but your strength shows through the pain. Beautifully written! Love, Margherita |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
...and wow Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sad, but strong and the last line says it all Maureen. Hugs, Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is so heartwrenchingly sad, you keep on saving and working toward the day when you won't be there. Excellent write. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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