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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-01-23 08:38 AM

Alive

Each sense that tells me I’m alive
Tells me to, that I survive
They satellite about my goal
And feed light to my very soul

I orbit with a sense of core
That fills me with a living awe
And though I pass a storm or two
It’s always bright when I pass through

The field is always greener when
I sense the meaning of the glen
And the sky a bluer tone
When sensing all the meanings known

Perhaps I live within a dream
But meanings hinge upon a seem
And I would fly within the wile
Then have me live a different style

So catch me in the morning’s dew
Where life awakes each morning new

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2005-01-23 08:52 AM

So true, so true, Sy! Very well expressed!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-01-23 08:53 AM

Sy, if you were here, your dew, sir,
would be crystallized gems...

But still and all, you'd feel alive!

Good Sunday morning, m'friend...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-01-23 10:16 AM

And though I pass a storm or two
It’s always bright when I pass through

And this gives strength to cope anew with every day's challenges.

You are beautifully alive in your poetic perceptions, dear Seymour.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-01-23 11:35 AM

Each new morning does bring a sun rise - whether it is seen or merely felt - enjoyed this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-01-23 11:57 AM

morning sir, this was a pleasure

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

6 posted 2005-01-23 01:14 PM

Well since you can't bottle that great attitude and sell me a case I'll settle for the momentary glow felt in its reading. Enjoyed

Poets against the war is redundant

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2005-01-23 06:10 PM

The field is always greener when
I sense the meaning of the glen

You have such a beautiful mind, Sy.
It is an honor to read your work, truly.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2005-01-23 09:51 PM

I orbit with a sense of core
That fills me with a living awe
================================

I feel the same way about your rhymes divine.

*ww*

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-01-23 10:01 PM

with wise words comes understanding

had to read you again

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

10 posted 2005-01-24 02:09 AM

nice positive outlook - rather inspiring

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

11 posted 2005-01-24 03:15 AM

Seymour, I'll not admit that I've been a little blue. But I sure can use a bit of you. Thank you, marty

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-01-24 05:28 AM

just what this lady needed this morning

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2005-01-24 03:31 PM

So very beautiful... this is excellent, my friend! *S*

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

14 posted 2005-01-24 08:09 PM

I always like your rhyming

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

15 posted 2005-01-24 08:14 PM

Some nice lines here

glider

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2005-01-24 08:32 PM

And we can sit around a table...sipping a cup
of Joe...and that would be all we need..

Thanx my friend for sharing this.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

17 posted 2005-01-25 02:38 PM

Seymour, Somehow I feel this needs to be read again. If not by others, than certainly by me. Thank you once again.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

18 posted 2005-01-25 02:42 PM

Good think you never run out of dew there honey bunny!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

19 posted 2005-01-25 02:44 PM

"Perhaps I live within a dream
But meanings hinge upon a seem
And I would fly within the wile
Then have me live a different style"

That does say a lot!
Excellent write.

JL

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

20 posted 2005-01-25 07:01 PM

Nice one Sy.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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