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Open Poetry #34
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-01-23 02:57 AM


The sun is slowly going down
A bronze tone
lies upon the quiet sea

Flights of sparrows
those brave little warriors small of life
pass across the somber sky

Our standards above the castle walls
gently wave in the autumn air

How else could it be
my honored lord

It was after all
he sought to do
the answer to his prayer
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-01-23 01:39 PM

Yes, just so.

This is beautiful!

Love, Margherita
*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
2 posted 2005-01-23 03:39 PM

Beautiful write john!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-28 02:11 AM

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