Open Poetry #34 |
Universes |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Notes of a musical heart Painting landscape of feelings. Inside one painting can live a heart In another, you’re creative soul. Words upon pages of imagination Mental illusions beyond a time Weathering in ghostly impressions Recordings implanted uniquely From the universe of one’s creation Into others of inner contemplation. Artists, thinkers of shared universes Teaching tools for the liberal arts Never having a master enslave them For their divine gift has no master, Being judged only in their heaven Feeling the art of their existence. D.Lester Young Somewhere in America not on company time 01/16 to 1/17/05 The Terminated Crossfire Poet |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I like this. The title intrigues my mind. Universes...mmm...uni-verses. Verses for everyone. LOL! This is a great poem D.L. Truly a pleasure to read and filter through with my fingers. Loved it! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
interesting |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A sense of empowerment envelopes the reader. Enjoyed Poets against the war is redundant |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed the heartbeat of this piece... Very well written. TD |
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