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Birds of January
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Birds of January |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Come back dear birds, the evening's shadow barely grown the childrens prayers not yet begun, the moon awaits the nod of sky to drape the stage of black design, the stars have yet to shimmer round the midnight matron beaming proud, the nights ensemble courts the eye the dwindling winds sweet lullabye, come back my friends it's barely dark, these eyes not groomed yet for such stark, have viewed horizons rushed your flight seeking respite from destined plight, can not the angels shield the sorrow of prophesies carried to fear the morrow, return to me in candle's dance, the tones of faith the song revamped. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, the birds - and the hopes of spring and summer upon their wings - and all the warmth inside and out that means - brought thoughts of longing and coming sweetness to my mind-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wish I could write like this |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause! I thought I was the only one who talks to birds.... A facinating poem to read on a frozen, Sunday morning, thank you for the poetical breakfest. _____________ice/ford ><> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful, dear Michelle, and even rhymed to perfection ... I am hearing a Spring tone in the birds' song these days. It seems too early, but the anticipation is in the air. Great write really and highly enjoyed! Love, Margherita  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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