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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2005-01-22 09:06 PM

Boulder of lonely

Teeters on the mountain's edge

I hold it, alone

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-01-22 09:56 PM

and I know how painful that is

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-01-22 10:23 PM

too much for one to carry alone

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-22 10:33 PM

Wind of friendship blows
wrapping in warm heart embrace
helps to ease the load

It is a heavy load to hold on your own - I understand and feel this - sometimes warm words from friends help lift a bit of the weight from our shoulders

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2005-01-22 11:11 PM

More each time, each moment of each time....especially when it's fresh.

~~J

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2005-01-23 03:55 PM

Especially when it's fresh!
Yep, lonely has way too long of a shelf life.

Good write, James_A~

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-23 11:08 PM

wow....

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-01-24 03:26 PM

If I were to read thousands of poems today, I don't think I could possibly find one more touching... I feel this one so... yes.

Absolutely excellent!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-01-24 04:14 PM

Can't be done. Good image in this one. I like it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2005-01-24 04:19 PM

Jaime~
I KNOW this one intimately~
Too intimately~

*Huglets*
Well done, dear friend~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

wandering glider
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since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

10 posted 2005-01-24 07:58 PM

Like a smothering vine
it grows so tiresome
day after long day

glider

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

11 posted 2005-01-25 06:10 AM

screaming canyon
avalanche of whispers
silence killed her

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2005-01-25 10:28 AM

Atlas renews hope
Stress of it streams down his face
Only will survives

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2005-01-25 11:00 AM

well, come, sit beside me for a moment....lets share a picnic lunch, talk, and even out that teeter to a level of cities yet to be built

Hugs....

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

14 posted 2005-01-30 03:50 PM

If only, we could let it go..."lonely"

Nicely done.

INclan

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2005-01-30 06:27 PM

Jamie...this poem is heavy!

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