Open Poetry #34 |
Boulder Of Lonely . . Senryu |
James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Boulder of lonely Teeters on the mountain's edge I hold it, alone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I know how painful that is |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
too much for one to carry alone |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wind of friendship blows wrapping in warm heart embrace helps to ease the load It is a heavy load to hold on your own - I understand and feel this - sometimes warm words from friends help lift a bit of the weight from our shoulders Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
More each time, each moment of each time....especially when it's fresh. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Especially when it's fresh! Yep, lonely has way too long of a shelf life. Good write, James_A~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
wow.... ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If I were to read thousands of poems today, I don't think I could possibly find one more touching... I feel this one so... yes. Absolutely excellent! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Can't be done. Good image in this one. I like it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jaime~ I KNOW this one intimately~ Too intimately~ *Huglets* Well done, dear friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Like a smothering vine it grows so tiresome day after long day glider |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
screaming canyon avalanche of whispers silence killed her "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Atlas renews hope Stress of it streams down his face Only will survives |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, come, sit beside me for a moment....lets share a picnic lunch, talk, and even out that teeter to a level of cities yet to be built Hugs.... |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
If only, we could let it go..."lonely" Nicely done. INclan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie...this poem is heavy! |
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