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0 posted 2005-01-21 06:21 PM



Wave-torn kelp in heaps

Ocean shows her underwear

There are crabs in them

© Copyright 2005 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-21 06:35 PM


giggling, love it!

Well Done

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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2 posted 2005-01-21 08:17 PM


Hanging on to green

Kelp eyes in deeply blue seas

Crabs go for the ride

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3 posted 2005-01-21 11:43 PM


Thanks for the chuckle, the askew imagery.

Poets against the war is redundant

Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-22 12:51 PM


Giggle - loving this

blue hues wave hello
starfish sing the hit parade
tides wave in applause

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

iliana
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5 posted 2005-01-22 01:04 AM


You, silly!  But, this is a good one!   ....jo
Thomas119gold
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6 posted 2005-01-22 03:34 AM


This is hilarious
I felt a need to scratch
LOL

Tom

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7 posted 2005-01-22 09:35 AM


heheheh
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8 posted 2005-01-22 11:25 PM


Nice write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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9 posted 2005-01-24 02:17 PM


ROFLMAO... I wasn't anticipating the humor... but I love it!!! LOL

No one does haikus/senyrus better, sir! *S*

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10 posted 2005-01-24 02:24 PM


I love this one! You are hereby confirmed to have a weird sense of humor.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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11 posted 2005-01-24 06:06 PM


This is a hoot! You have some sense of humor!!

Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Martie
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12 posted 2005-01-25 08:48 PM


Ed....Your sense of humor is showing and I caught it with a smile...thanks!  
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13 posted 2005-01-26 03:39 AM


lol this is great...
It's good to laugh.

Always, Alyssa

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...I am a girl of tears.

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14 posted 2005-01-30 03:48 PM


EEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwww.......
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