Open Poetry #34 |
darkness |
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I close my eyes and let darkness surround as your essense slowly caresses i find myself spellbound the softness of ones touch can unlock chains unleashing fears of such as your breath warms the cold amd returns life to a soul i hold i find myself embracing a heart filled with such sorrow allowing tears to finally part as i look deep into your eyes i can feel your souls cries now i long for your touch within as i kiss your lips i'm slowly taken in my heart beats loud and strong as yours beats playing same song as my hand slides down your chest the feel of you pleases at best as our bellies embrace lightning boltz throughout me race a fire within begs you please come in touch me tonight deep and tight let our souls ride within where pleasure can now begin [This message has been edited by MGROVES (01-22-2005 10:03 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou dixie i keep getting side tracked from finishing memories. maybe for the best. thanks for reply. hope your heart is feeling joy not sorrow this night |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"let our souls ride within where pleasure can now begin" Sadly today the soul is rarely involved but when it is ... whew! Good write! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wish I had written this one |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wow! indeed does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all for your inspirations as well as your kind replies |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderfully passionate write, dear Marsha. A darkness flashing with lightnings! Your memories are very vivid, I would say. You write with great rhythm. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
M thankyou so much your replies mean a lot to me as do all the others thankyou |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
wow...very amazing write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcia~ I've read this several times ... I feel the sensitivity of one soul embracing the thoughts of another within this penning~ Felt the rapidity of your fingers typing the thoughts, almost as though you didn't realize that your thoughts were falling to the page ... that is a *gift* ... open yourself up to it and let it flow~ 'touch me tonight' And with your words you HAVE touched me and others~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
bless you marge~ |
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