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MGROVES
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0 posted 2005-01-22 07:50 PM




I close my eyes
and let darkness surround
as your essense slowly caresses
i find myself spellbound
the softness
of ones touch
can unlock chains
unleashing
fears of such
as your breath
warms the cold
amd returns life
to a soul i hold
i find myself
embracing a heart
filled with such sorrow
allowing tears to finally part
as i look
deep into your eyes
i can feel
your souls cries
now i long for your
touch within
as i kiss your lips
i'm slowly taken in
my heart
beats loud and strong
as yours beats
playing same song
as my hand
slides down
your chest
the feel
of you
pleases at best
as our bellies
embrace
lightning boltz
throughout me race
a fire within
begs you
please come in
touch me tonight
deep and tight
let our souls
ride within
where pleasure
can now begin





[This message has been edited by MGROVES (01-22-2005 10:03 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-01-22 09:48 PM


wow!
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2 posted 2005-01-22 10:08 PM


thankyou dixie  i keep getting side tracked from finishing memories. maybe for the best.  thanks for reply.   hope your heart is feeling joy not sorrow this night


Honeybunch
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3 posted 2005-01-22 11:27 PM


"let our souls
ride within
where pleasure
can now begin"

Sadly today the soul is rarely involved but when it is ... whew!  Good write!

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4 posted 2005-01-23 12:49 PM



wish I had written this one

Snowflake From Hell
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5 posted 2005-01-23 12:58 PM


wow! indeed

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

MGROVES
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6 posted 2005-01-23 01:27 AM


thankyou all for your inspirations as well as your kind replies  


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7 posted 2005-01-23 10:23 AM


Wonderfully passionate write, dear Marsha.

A darkness flashing with lightnings!

Your memories are very vivid, I would say.

You write with great rhythm.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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8 posted 2005-01-23 12:06 PM


M thankyou so much your replies mean a lot to me

as  do all the others   thankyou


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9 posted 2005-01-23 04:03 PM


wow...very amazing write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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10 posted 2005-01-23 06:25 PM


Marcia~

I've read this several times ... I feel the sensitivity of one soul embracing the thoughts of another within this penning~

Felt the rapidity of your fingers typing the thoughts, almost as though you didn't realize that your thoughts were falling to the page ... that is a *gift* ... open yourself up to it and let it flow~

'touch me tonight'

And with your words you HAVE touched me and others~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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11 posted 2005-01-28 04:23 AM


bless you marge~


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